Comments on: Soul Thief: Chapter Thirteen

By: Sean

Sean — Mon, 26 Jul 2010 17:56:05 +0000

Nope… my penis can’t tell time.
But it can gauge distance and depth really well, so it’s a trade-off. I guess.

By: Mark

Mark — Fri, 16 Jul 2010 12:13:25 +0000

You mean your penis can’t tell time? In all seriousness, though, Sean, things are moving toward a couple of climaxes that will alter Doug’s and Annie’s lives forever. You might even get the chance to meet the Collector.
Thanks again for reading.

By: Sean

Sean — Fri, 16 Jul 2010 07:07:19 +0000

“fluttering things in his psyche that were sometimes birds sometimes bats”- absolutely priceless!
Your vivid description and characterization is spot-on. I’ve learned a few things in this chapter.
Annie’s definitely a woman in all her forms: seductiveness, naivete, complication.
However, I didn’t know that Doug penis could tell time!

The dialogue had some bite to it, and Doug’s hallucinations are becoming more frequent (and tolerable), and it SEEMS like they might just be starting to blur the line between the mind and the tangible… I’m so digging this.

By: Mark

Mark — Tue, 13 Jul 2010 19:38:21 +0000

Thanks again, my friend and constant reader. You are the reason I do it.

By: Kecia

Kecia — Tue, 13 Jul 2010 16:46:55 +0000

Hey Mark, very vivid writing, beautifully done!! See ya next week:)

By: Mark

Mark — Mon, 12 Jul 2010 20:32:59 +0000

I’m glad you’re enjoying The Lost Village, Jason. I think you’ll like how it plays out. My new publisher is releasing it on September 1st along with a slew of advertising. They think the book is going to be a hit. I hope so. I should have the artwork for the new cover sometime today or tomorrow. Wait till you see it. It’s awesome. I’ll post it on my site as soon as I have it.

Again, thanks for staying with me on Soul Thief. I’m really enjoying writing it as a serial novel. I don’t know how it’s going to end up any more than you do. I guess we’ll both be surprised.

By: Jason

Jason — Mon, 12 Jul 2010 19:06:39 +0000

Another great chapter, I really hate waiting for the next one. Just so you know I’m about 400 pages into the Lost Village, very good book. You’ve done a nice job of telling a really good story but also you’ve really developed characters that are verying interesting and not just one dimensional. I can’t believe there’s 200 pages left, the story seems like it’s at it’s climax right now, I can’t wait to find out what happens and how it all ties together in the end.