Comments on: Soul Thief: Chapter Five

By: Nick

Nick — Wed, 13 Oct 2010 15:37:45 +0000

Great chapter !! I live in Palm Harbor Florida !! It’s a great place to live – but it has some secrects as well ….

By: Mark

Mark — Mon, 28 Jun 2010 13:07:35 +0000

She is shutting down, Brenton. She’s caught between her duty to her mother (although she never respected her) and her combined hate and fear of her father. And Doug is caught in the middle. I’d hate to be him as well. But if you’d hate to be him now, wait till later.
Again, thanks for reading.

By: Brenton

Brenton — Mon, 28 Jun 2010 12:39:17 +0000

Good job at the background story. Really makes you feel sympathy for Annie and makes you understand why she is mentally escaping and shuting down. It seems like that is what her mind is conditioned to do at her fathers house. I can just imagine Doug is about to explode. Wife going down hill, going to meet up with the father-in-law from hell, voices screaming in your head. Hate to be him right now.

By: Jason

Jason — Mon, 07 Jun 2010 19:10:00 +0000

Really good story. You’ve got me hooked now!!

By: Kecia

Kecia — Tue, 11 May 2010 23:19:42 +0000

SWEEEEET!!!!!

By: Mark

Mark — Tue, 11 May 2010 19:54:34 +0000

See you next week, Kecia. Again thanks for reading. I’ve decided that the loyal readers who stay with me throughout the writing of this novel will get a free signed copy when it’s published.

By: Kecia

Kecia — Tue, 11 May 2010 16:22:21 +0000

Just gets better and better Mark! See ya next week:)

By: Mark

Mark — Tue, 11 May 2010 13:37:08 +0000

Thanks again, Kymm. Glad you’re reading. This novel is an experiment to see how many people I can draw to my site with the offer of a free novel. So far I’ve received replies from five or six. Don’t know how many have actually read because some won’t leave replies. But thanks so much for continuing to read. I hope the numbers grow as the book progresses.

By: Kymm

Kymm — Mon, 10 May 2010 09:33:45 +0000

A wonderful chapter! Essential background information about Annie – how Doug and Annie met amidst the influence – and lack of it – of her father.
I love the line. ‘like a kid caught up in the middle of discovery.’ so simple yet so evocative – one can imagine someone on a bike at the top of a hill – free-wheeling and saying ‘weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee’ on the way down…..tasting freedom from a sheltered and secluded life.
Then with Doug we see the natural yet uncertain fear when something catastrophic happens of whether you ever really know someone. Fear and insecurity combined with slight paranoia and anger as demons of his own plague him too!
MORE please!