Comments on: Soul Thief: Chapter Two

By: Mark

Mark — Sun, 11 Jul 2010 17:17:12 +0000

You nailed it dead center, Manda. These are the dynamics I wish to convey, and your feedback shows that I have been successful in my approach. As you will find out in future chapters, as much as Annie wants to be one of us, normal, she can never escape the demons of her past. Thank you for reading. I hope you stay with it till the end.

By: Manda

Manda — Sun, 11 Jul 2010 15:27:37 +0000

Well done! I keep seeing it as a film…. Becoming quickly addicted…. I love the play of the simple name Annie… the wife and soon to be mother… normal like all of us… who has the heiress side… Antoinette…. who came from money and power… You like her because shes like all of us… approachable and normal… and when you meet her father…. you instantly want to take her side in all things… Her guy trying so hard to take care of her keep her safe… Can’t wait for more!

By: Brenton

Brenton — Sun, 27 Jun 2010 15:09:29 +0000

I have read enough of this story to acclimate my brain to Mark’s style of writing. That said, I feel the story is truly taking off now. A couple of previous questions have been answered and were replaced with new ones. The plot has begun to spill out and I am anxiously awaiting some dramatic revelations. You have me for another chapter.

By: Gwyn Weyant

Gwyn Weyant — Sat, 22 May 2010 01:03:26 +0000

Mark: I’m reading to catch up. This is a wonderful story.

By: Mark

Mark — Tue, 27 Apr 2010 17:19:23 +0000

Thanks for stopping by, Fran. A new installment will be uploaded every Sunday morning. Hope you continue to read and enjoy.
Mark

By: Fran Orenstein

Fran Orenstein — Tue, 27 Apr 2010 13:36:14 +0000

Intriguing, compelling and I want more. Well written, good story line and characters. Thanks for sharing it. Fran

By: Mark

Mark — Tue, 27 Apr 2010 12:31:18 +0000

I’m not telling. You’ll have to see. It’s not what you think. But that’s the fun of it. It never is. It’s a dark journey that takes many twists and turns. Some will make you laugh, some will make you cry, and think and wonder, and some will shock you to the foundations of your being. All truths will be revealed in time, my dear.
Yes, next Sunday, Kecia. Again, thanks so much for reading.

By: Kecia

Kecia — Tue, 27 Apr 2010 04:52:35 +0000

OOOh what are they???Vampires??? This is soooo good, I cant believe he didnt tell her….. Will he? Will it change her mind??? Oh the lovely torment:) Next sunday then???If it all works out?:)

Thank you Mark!

By: Mark

Mark — Mon, 26 Apr 2010 14:19:27 +0000

Hey, Kymm, again, thank you. I think you’re my most loyal fan.

By: Kymm

Kymm — Sun, 25 Apr 2010 14:42:07 +0000

So nicely done Mark! An excellent chapter giving a nice teasing glimpse into the background of the characters. Your descriptions – as always -give such clear imagery to a reader: ‘…..shooting rooster tails of rainwater……’ and the description of them both in the hotel – no words – just emotion – the calm showering together with no words etc.
I am looking forward to chapter 3 very much!